My School People

First, I will evaluate my fellow freshmans blog. This blog was done by Bryce Ely. The blog was about the USC and UCLA football game. The blog very well done. Except for the fact that there was not any links. Another minor problem was that there were some spelling mistakes, but hey who doesn't make spelling mistakes. Overall I liked this blog. It was full of information and held my attention.

Second, I will evaluate another freshman's blog. This blog was done by Andrew Patag. Thsi blog was very well written and pretty well thought out for a freshman. I really liked the blog abotu his evaluation of other peoples blogs. He broke their blogs down, really shwoing that he read all their blogs entries, and why he liked them.

Third, I will look at my girlfriends's blog. This blog on a whole was just okay. The entry about teh same sex school's was very good. It was veyr informative, and very well written, other than some spelling and grammar errors. But overall that entry was very good. Her other entries were just okay. There were alot of spelling mistakes and her links were "interesting". But I guess I liked her blog. I am also thankful that she doesn't read my blog or else she might be a little bit angry.

Fourth, I will look at Austin's blog. This blog was very short on a whole. All the entries are very short. The spelling is horrid on the blogs, but the entries contain good throught out information. I especially like how he expressed his thoughts through the tobacco tax. He was very good thoughts and if he tried a little bit harder could, make this blog into something very good.

Finally, I will look at my summer baseball buddies blog. Thsi blog is extremly good. It is very well written, and very well organized. His thoughts are very well put out, and understandable. His topics are very original, and interesting. If I coudl give any criticism it woudl be that he didn't have five links in all his entries. But, other than that it was very good.